My own ending story

 The title is My First Love 

by: Beagle

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• Theme : love teen fiction 

• There are 2 main characters, Mark and Vi Park. Vi Park Is Half Korean and Half chinese. She speaks fluently at Mandarien and Korean. She is an introvert , she is ambitious. Mark is Canadian. He is very like play a guitar. He had a bright personality. The boy that everyone adored.

Orientation/Beginning 

-The story began when Vi park and Mark they met Coincidentally in Elementary school, and ever since. Then she had liked him.

Vi Park had moved from Seoul to Vancouver and had fallen in the playground because her Clumsy self was the only one who came to help her is Mark. And because Vi Park didn't know English really well. At that point in time, She accidentally spoke in korean to him but he spoke in korean back. He's spent his breaks and lunches with her until he moved to High School. She ended up going to the same High School and they spoke occasionally, but then one. He left.

Conflict

 -The conflict from this story when Mark left. Vi Park didn't know where he went. But its been half a year And her feelings for him still haven't changed. The day her mom invited going to back Korea That was Very surprised For Vi Park. She won't go back to Korea. She still don't know where Mark went she can't leave without knowing. She though that what if he comes back and looks for her?. 

Climax

-The climax from this story when VI Park landed in Seoul. She met 3 boys who treat her very well like bestfriend. And very unexpected the boys live in a same apartment with her. Day by day Vi very close with them, they are going hangout, tell a jokes each other And, someday the boys invited Vi park to watched their practice for dancing. Because the boys is an Idol. When Vi Park arrived in front of the practice room door. She suddenly stopped, and she didn't expected that she met him, she saw him, her first love Mark Lee. 

Resolution

- Vi Park woke up the next morning and sat at the Chair. Her dad suddenly said " I want you to Audition I'll set everything up, all you have to do is start dance practice again and start singing lessons. " He said seriously. She have no idea what her want to be she have thought about being an author multiple times but her father has forced, she can't do Anything She only to do what her father wants. 

After about she's been a trainee for a year she became an idol now, she tried to make her dad proud. The relationship with Mark is getting closer because they we're in same agency , their relationship likes when they were in Vancouver, their feelings are getting deeper but they still hold it in.

But someday she went out into the balcony and Mark was out. Suddenly Mark said " I like you I know this is the most stupidest time to tell you, and I should've told you like when I first realized that I liked you but I was to blinded by the fame ahead. I've likes you ever since the day you fell in the playground. " Vi park feels her heart still beating so fast like in the past. 

 Ending

 Mark Lee is Vipark's fiance now. In the end Mark proposed her. They were still 23 years old, He proposed her in the Sweetest way. He finally got permission from her parents to go out of the country with her. 

They went back to Canada together and he took her to her favorite Ice-cream store when they were little. And they back in Korea, Mark asked Vi's parent to marrying her and they ended happily.

-My own ending is Where Vi and Mark they were not together, they Mark have their own partners, they are ended with happily married and they live with the destiny that they have chosen.

I still choose a happy ending, but being happy in my version is different from the original story. Where in the original story Mark and Vi ended up together until they got married but in my ending for Mark and Vi didn't up together, they had their own partners that they had chosen.

-Why did I choose an ending like that, because in this story their love story is too smooth. There are no crucial problems, and this story contains too many hallucination so I choose to make a different ending from the origin.